Here is another from the incoherent chick from AOL... She titled this one "The One" (does she mean Jet Li, from the movie The One?)
The one we love does not love me. The one he love does not love him!
Ohhhh... a love triangle!! Or is that a love quadrangle? She says "the one we love".. not sure who the 'we' is.
One time there was nothing there for me to hold on to now that it is gone
Well, duh! If it is gone, you can't hold on to it.
what is there to hold on to. The air the dirt the cloud nothing there for me.
There is also no proper punctuation for you. Questions generally end with a ?, even when rhetorical.
Me and only me. There was one the one that I loved the one that will never
love me the one that did not even now I was there.
Huh? I'm losing cound of the people. There is only her, there is the one, and the one that she loves, and the one that won't ever love her and the one who doesn't know she is there. I think that is now 5 people involved. Turning into a regular orgy if all these people got together with a bottle of Jack Daniels.
We breath the same air we
look at the same sky we see the same moon that shines in the sky like a
miracle that is impossible to grab.
That is actually poetic! She should have stopped there.
What is there left for me to do what?
From poetic to pure incoherent crap in one line.
I know that he was the one the only one. Now he is gone no one will ever take
he place.
I wonder where 'he' went. Was it a "Hey honey, I'm going to go get a pack of smokes" and he never returned kinda thing?
Should I give up?
Yes.
Should I keep on trying?
No.
Should I run until there is no more air inside me no power to propel me?
Yes.
The one is gone!
And so is your sanity, from what I can tell. I hope writing isn't what this girl wants to do for a living.